Hey everyone,

I'm not sure if we're allowed to (so I'd like a yay or nay if someone knows),
but are we allowed to post made-up sex stories/fantasies with any of the girls featured in Virtual Girl HD?

Usually, if any stories are published on the c-s-s-a.com site, author's post something like this before their story commences:

"This story is a work of fiction and is not true in any sense. I have no idea of the life styles of the celebrities involved. Anyone under eightteen years of age or anyone easily offended by adult stories should stop reading now. Thanks for reading [email protected]"

So the question is, are we allowed to post them?

Personally, I'd like to either write or read a story about Lucianna, Vicky S or Mina. The costumes that some of these girls wear certainly helps with possible storylines! (Lucianna - *****, Chikita - Private Tutor etc)

Cheers...

I'll have to leave that answer up to the MODS.
But I think so long as it's in one of the Bronze or Higher areas, ( nudity is allowed in bronze and up ) it shouldn't pose a problem.

Start a thread, and post one..
The worst that can happen, is a MOD will remove it if it's not appropriate.

Ok, I've been working on a couple for Lucianna in particular (I ***** love that gir.. I mean woman! haha)

I'll try and contact the MODS if possible to get the okay...

I don't see a problem either, but i would say that you should watch the tone you use and be careful.

It doesn't matter if you claim that is fictional, you are pretending to use real people here as your characters, the models, and so you might piss off easily either the fans of those models, the guys at Totem and the girls. Writing publicly about real people is always delicate in any aspect of life, unless is factual journalistic stuff, and even then is controversial. Any real person you mention can demand you to stop and remove the content mentioning them at any time. In extreme cases they might even take legal actions.

On the other hand, explicit sexual language is frowned upon, the few that post in that style use a lot of creativity and lots of euphemisms to say those things in a no offensive way.

So, not sure if you'll find this forum as right place to post that kind of stuff, this forum is very free in many aspects, but is the forum of a pay site so this kind of content will be closely observed.

Just my view.

Good luck.

No one has ever raised this one before and it is not covered by the T & C's, however, one possible arguement using the models name in a story, on a site which sells animations of her, could possible be interpreted as a brreach of copyright, because I gues the contract with Totem did not cover such an event.

I am not saying that it IS a breach only that it might be.

I would prefer to seek guidence from Totem on this before you start posting OK?

Give it a shot. Like WA said, the worst thing which could happen is that it would be pulled down.
From my point of view it can't be more worse than the picture flood.
And if you go to the girls comments page and read what some guys are writting there, than a fictive story shouldn't ***** anybody.

I'd say the best bet would be to write it for DeskBabes!
That goes along with the more explicit content available there.

BUT DON'T DOWNLOAD DB'S NOW !!
THERE'S A LOT OF GLITCHES HAPPENING THAT TOTEM'S WORKING ON FIXING RIGHT NOW!
LET THE BUGS BE FIXED FIRST!!

Although....
Writing for Vg could result in a rather interesting exercise in euphemistic erotic composition, as we see the girls...
"sluicin' up their winkies 'n' kissin' their patooties"!
:)

Thanks for the advice everyone! As I mentioned, probably best if I run it by the MOD's/TOTEM first and I'll let you know how I get on. Cutting out the foul language in the story should be no problem and trying to put a funny storyline in it (as plasonic suggested to me) might be the go. We all love these women and I surely wouldn't want to offend them in anyway.

hearsz,

I have raised the issue as promised. If I have not responded in a few days, say Friday evening, then we take it that Totem has no objections and you are frre to post. There is nothing in the T & C that expressly rules them out.

Just start slow :)

I like this idea, the one thing that I think that should be considered is the amount of characters that can be written in a post that might limit the OP's story.

For Mods. A way round this may to do the story on a dedicated stories site like literotica.com which is free and then maybe post the links on here. Would this be allowed?

I always thought that VGs would be a good subject for sex stories. In effect, it would just be a form of fanfiction.

Since we know what they look like they are easy to visualise. All you do is select two cards and make a story about them. I have to admit, I have even considered it myself.

If it is done well, I think it would be good marketing for VGHD and the girls. Anything that makes people enjoy the cards more can only be a good thing.

However, I suspect there would be restrictions on what is acceptable.

The stories would have to be fairly conventional, involving consensual sex which does not include any of the more controversial themes and fantasies.

In fact, the only thing that would really work would be lesbian story between two or more VGs, othewise it would feel a bit meaningless and/or irrelevant in the context of the site.

It would be a bit strange if anyone objected to having standard sexual description in a story, considering that it is not worse than some are actually doing in DB.

Also, since the girls are not using their real name (in most if not all cases) I assume, the story will never be about the girl as an individual, but more about the character she is playing.

Of course, if it is not allowed here, I suppose another option would be for someone could set up a VGHD fanfiction site.

@Cartef - Thanks for looking into this for me. I couldn't find where I could contact them so your interest in this topic is greatly appreciated.

@Apasas - It's been on my mind to write some stories on it and you make some good points such as whether or not it can be done, especially as quite of number of these models don't use their real names.
And the ones who do porn for a living surely wouldn't be offended by a sex story about them.

@DMon1981 - I'll have a look into that site and if there is a problem posting the stories on here, that will certainly be Plan B!

As I metioned earlier about the stories on the c-s-s-a site, these fictional stories are about celebrities (actresses, singers, reporters etc) so if it's legal to write it about them, then I can't see why we can't write about the girls on this site.
However, posting the stories on this forum is the only issue that I can see from the feedback you guys have given me.

The stories I intend to write and post will be based mainly on the costume or topic for the particular VG's cards. I don't believe it is worth writing anything smutty or anything with explicit language or stuff where people will be easily offended.

If we get the OK to do this, I really hope others will contribute because I too will look forward to reading them. Maybe short stories 100-500 words might be the go?

Just write it... I think the fans would love to read the stories.

@hears7 - I certainly think you have the right idea about the limitations. It is more about scenarios created from the costumes than anything else.

I also do not believe there is no reason why the girls should be offended by the stories. Many may even be flattered. And let's face it, many members make up their own stories about the girls in their own imagination. Indeed, to some extent that is the whole point. You are just proposing writing it down, that is all.

My only point of concern has nothing to do with whether it is appropriate or not to do such stories on this sites.

In my experience, fan fiction of any sort can be subject to negative as well as positive reviews. Many of the members here can be very vocal in their opinions, both negative or positive. So anyone submitting stories should be aware than not all feedback will be postive, and some may be very critical.


@technotony - And, yes. Bijou in that outfit is just begging for a story.
So anyone expecting Universal aclaim for writing stories on this site should not necessarily expect universal acclaim and should expect some biting negative comments. But I am sure that you are aware of that already.

To be honest, such things would be better put in a blog space in the member's profile. In that way the member could write stories or other relevant material and others could visit if interested. Unfortuntaly, there is no blog space here.

I think I may have figured a way around this... What if I sent the story to all the people who PM'd me for the stories by request?

That way technically, it wouldn't be on the forum, it would be in other people's Inbox's instead. That way people are less likely to be offended.

Of course I may have to send a hell of a lot of copies out to begin with but if I sent a few people a copy, then others could send their copies to others when they request it on this forum?

If I (and others who have written stories) were to attach a title to each story, then it could be posted on this forum which stories are available and which character (and their card) it features.

So for example, my first story would feature Lucianna and the story is called "Private Lesson". Once the story has been completed I or anyone else can post on the forum "Lucianna - Private Lesson now available."

How does that sound?

hello why you not made like me and use the internet space of your provider and create a little site ? all who are interressed can go and see, but made carrefool to the copyright, possible you must recreat the story.

if you want contact me and with pleasure i give you a little source for start your site.

and then you have not to send lot message hihihi ;*)

Personally i'd say just post your first story and see what becomes of it. I am definitely curious now and will have a look at it. And since you asked the mods there will be no negative consequences for you in the not likely case they have to remove it again.

I have not received a reply to my request to Totem, so to me this means that they have no objections so far.

I agree with Starryk's view. If they turn around tomorrow and say no, then because you asked and received no response, then will be no action taked against you.

If they firmly object, the worst we would do is to ban the topic, not the member.

But as I suggested go slow to start.

@Cartef - Thanks for getting back to me. I just have to make some adjustments to the story and I should hopefully have something up by tomorrow. Watch this space!!

@hearsz7 - You are a pioneer. I think what you are suggesting to do is reasonable and you have gone about the right way suggesting it.

I think everyone is interested to see how it will go. Pehaps even Totem. Perhaps that is why they have been unresponsive. they don't want to encourage something that may go wrong. But they don't want to prevent a possible marketing opportunity which may rasie interest in the cards further. Then again, perhaps they are just not botheed one way or the other.

@Apasas - Thanks for the comment, I've never been called a pioneer before! Love it, haha

Ok guys I've been trying to post the story but everytime I do it fails for some reason. It may have something to do with particular words used in my story that may automatically reject it. I'll keep trying and see how we go...

(I posted the one above to Apasas to see if it was just my internet, looks like that ain't the problem!!)

Lucianna - Part 1

Its is explicit.

Lucianna - Private Lesson (Part 1)
(This story is told from student Lucianna's POV)

The moment you walk in class, I immediately feel my silk black g-string get slightly wet. I stare at you for the rest of the class period, and squeeze my thighs shut, trying to ignore the ***** throbbing of my pussy.

I see you watching me cautiously, noticing my stares at your crotch...and not soon after you have to sit down to hide the bulge in your pants. I hide a smile.

I take it you noticed me wearing pigtails today, something I haven't done since I was ten. But it's worth it for the attention that you are giving me.

You also can't help but gaze at my long statuesque legs. Yes, they are wonderful. Your continuous staring is turning me on.

The class is over, and you call my name, and my heart stops and I feel a warmth between my thighs. I blush but wait till the rest of the class is gone to meet you at your desk. I walk slowly, trying hard to ignore delicious ache of my pussy, to calm the rapid beat of my heart.

You get up slowly and casually go to door, shut it, and lock it.
I tremble.

"Lucianna..." you, Mr. Brighton, begin.

"Yes, sir?"

"Is there something bothering you?" you ask, your expression concerned.

"No, sir." I whisper.

"Then why is it that your homework is never done, and you keep failing my tests?"

"I don’t know, sir." I know I am blushing furiously and look away.

You keep looking at me and say, "Is there something distracting you?"

I remain quiet, head down.

You place your hand against my chin and tilt my face up. "Lucianna, am I distracting you?"

I swallow then say, “Yes, sir. Your--c...err...you are very distracting."

You smile. "What were you going to say?"

I feel my face heat up some more, if possible. "Your cock, sir. It’s very distracting....I can't help but wonder how big it is."

"Lucianna, you are having bad thoughts about me," you state.

"Yes, sir." I feel myself trembling harder, tears in my eyes.
"Aren't you a little young to be having such thoughts?"
"I'm not a little girl you know!" I say angrily then shyly look back down. "Sorry.... I just mean...."

You take my hand, press it against your lips and whisper, "You have been a bad girl, Lucianna... thinking about all these lusty thoughts." I hear you chuckle. "We have to do something about that..." You give my palm a quick lick then lower it towards your chest, near your heart and I feel your heart beating as quick and hard as my own.

I let out a soft moan. "Please, sir. Do something!"

You grin, and bring me to your arms and kiss me. On the lips gently then sticking your tongue inside. I moan and pull you closer.

We kiss each other passionately and explore each other’s bodies.... you reach for my firm well developed breasts and then rip the white shirt away from my body. Your eyes light up as you discover that I' not wearing a bra. Your warm, wet, mouth reaches toward my nipples as your hands rise and cup my sexy bottom. Then you move the short patterned skirt and caress my bottom, finding my silk black g-string and moving it smoothly down my body.... then rub my ass a little more before reaching to touch my pussy then gently touching my clit.

Cont..

Having problems with part 2, but I got part 1 up. Will try in a 4 hours or so.

Thanks for sorting that out for me Cartref, will check back for Part 2 tomorrow.

A very good start and I too look forward to part 2. ;-D

I'm just adding a few pics whilst we try and get Part 2 up for you all...

I'm just adding a few pics whilst we try and get Part 2 up for you all...

Lucianna - Part 2

Caution: It is explicit.

Lucianna - Private Lesson (Part 2)
(This story is told from student Lucianna's POV)

I gasp at the erotic sensations but I want to pleasure you...I need to feel you.... so I remove your coat, and shirt.... then kiss your upper chest...and lower...and lower....

I unzip the zipper and slowly reach inside.

I groan, feeling my hand touch the hot, soft skin of your cock. I lower to my knees and take it out and began to lick it like a lollipop. Licking at the tender tip, and down the side of your shaft, right to the base of your balls. I hear, and see that you are liking it...so I continue this. You tell me that I have a habit of always opening my mouth in class so I should put it to good use. Giggling at the remark, without hesitation I place your whole cock in my mouth.... And suck hard.

I reach down, and touch myself, feeling the wetness of my sex, but soon stop, wanting to give you my whole attention...Up and down....slow then fast....and faster still.....taking it all in.

"Oh Lucianna" you groan as you feel a thrill come over you at the feeling of my pretty pink lips glide up and down your erect manhood.

I feel you about to cum and I caress your balls, lightly grazing them with my fingertips. You don't want me to stop...but you don't want to cum inside my mouth...so you pull out.

You pull me up and kiss my lips before sitting me on your desk and opening my thighs and placing your mouth against my wet vagina. I scream in pleasure and dig your head deeper, not wanting you to stop, feeling your tongue run up and down my wetness. Then suddenly I feel a finger enter me. I gasp and stare down at you. Your dark eyes stare back at mine as you continue to suck my pussy and gently being to finger ***** me.
“Ooooh! Please!”

You moan my name against my pussy and start frantically licking my clit. I arch my back and throw my head back and let out a soft scream as I feel you enter a second finger inside.
Right as I feel my muscles tightening, you pull back, take a condom from your work draw. Once placing it upon your shaft, you breath becomes heavy as you place your cock right against my dripping, wet pussy. You move my hips upward, lifting my skirt to my waist, then shove me forward, and open my long legs wide. We are both gasping for breath and sweat slides down our slick bodies. You rest your forehead against mine and stroke to shove your cock inside my tight pussy, going in, in, in….inch by inch and so deep. Once you rest as far as you can go you slowly pull back and enter me yet again. Slowly….

"Oh, sir! Oh, my..." I squeal..

"Oh Lucianna", your pussy feels amazing!"

You look at me with desire and lean forward to kiss me. Kissing me and tangling your tongue with mine, making me taste my own juices. And you begin to move faster, grabbing my thighs and hips forcefully.
You're relishing the chance to do this to one of your students, reaching down to fondle and pinch at my large breasts as you continue to move your cock in and out of me.
"Is this what you wanted?" You manage to question pleasuring your naughty student.