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OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
March 8, 2010 (edited)
I am making a VGHD Reseller web page ( http://www.desktopbabeshd.com ).

I decided to try to make it 100% myself, but I am not sure if I like its progress. Its NOT complete. I had a friend look at the basic design and their first opinion is that it is too "girlish" when most likely men are the primary customer. I personally thougt if guys are looking for girls, pink is appropiate.

Am I missing the ball here? Also, if your good at making sites or artwork, I could use help if you think you can improve it. lol I know I suck at it, and I am happy to pay if required. :)

Thanks all,
Sammi
yosho1967
Da In Apr 2009

439 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Very good thing, my friend.
Go ahead!
daniel1111
Da In Dec 2007

715 post(s)
March 9, 2010
I wish you the best for your site!
DIDGEDRUM
Da In Mar 2008

2351 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Onwards and Upwards, Sammi, Wishing You All the Best !!!
coldinjected
Da In May 2009

230 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Looks good thus far!!! Keep up the good work!
DareGirl
Da In Feb 2010

93 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Hi,It does look good Sammi. Are You a bit more happy now?
Nice to see You doing something positive! Takes Your mind off things.
Wyldanimal
MODERATORE
Da In Mar 2008

3927 post(s)
March 9, 2010
just a couple of link corrections needed.
all of the links with Clicks.Totem.com should all be changed to c.actiondesk.com

looks good so far...


plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
..And back she comes guised as Xena, Warrior Princess!
Good on ya, girl!
Good job, nice creative enthusiasm,nice practical graphics, does the job, get's the info out. Nicely organized. If I came on it fresh..(Hey, I didn't mean...er...y'know)er..came upon it fresh I'd want to join.
I love the links...Why 2 versions of girls pics?
Some suggestions:

"We got" should be "We've got"
"there for" should be "therefore"
"100% clean", maybe "100% spam & virus clean"
Knowing what's in here I'm a bit uncomfortable with "bootylicious latinas"-conjures up more junk ina trunk than VGHD has...Perhaps just "sensual,(smokin'?) Latinas"
Try-"horny stripping secretaries"

In the bottom blurb:
Try-"GET A FULLY NUDE STRIPPER ON YOUR DESKTOP EVERYDAY WITH INEXPENSIVE MEMBERSHIP"
No"try our software for free" try "get our software for free which includes a free non nude preview trailer every day"
Delete"You'll be limited"
Last line,maybe-"With membership you get a girl stripping to full nudity daily etc."
OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Ummm @Plasonic... You sure you were on the right site? lol
DIDGEDRUM
Da In Mar 2008

2351 post(s)
March 9, 2010
That's what i just Asked Him ???LOOL.
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010
...oh...just saw the fine print as to why two sets of pics...Maybe abit larger print or in my case, readers with a bit more focus.(smile)
I am not sure if you need to talk with Totem about using the name VGHD in your site. I do know that they have a lot of promotional things, banners, videos, etc. plus a program where they reimburse you for any members joining through your website.Check out "promote" on top of forum page.
What I really wanted to add here is it might help you to have some testimonials from some of us long time VGHD members..
Here's mine:
"I've been a member of this site for over 2 years now & am very happy with all aspects of it. Viewing sexy, strippers,dancing upon my command, right on my taskbar in a spam & virus free environment is a most enjoyable cyber pleasure.The fact that it is very inexpensive & includes a helpful & humorous community of members is a very strong plus.
C'mon in, the babes are fine!"
---Plasonic

..If you want more ...just ask!
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010
OOOps....this is what came up when I copy & pasted

http://strippingdesktopbabes.com/
OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
odd, its http://www.desktopbabeshd.com

Should look very Pink
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010
OK...I got it now...Google didn't know yours/referred me to the other...if you ever make those above mistakes there are the corrections LOL
Keep my quote tho...y' might use 'em.
OK, I'm goin' into the Pink ...(oh oh...interpretation!) ...and check yours out!
Your SITE! (AGHHH)
DIDGEDRUM
Da In Mar 2008

2351 post(s)
March 9, 2010

Duh !!!!!!!!
OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Yea I have code in it so Google cant detect it, until its completed.
OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Still not sure about the pink... And I think it definitly needs to be wider on the page... Some of you are awesome with graphic art, I could REALLY use some help... hint hint...

lol
DIDGEDRUM
Da In Mar 2008

2351 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
Sammi, You could put the Girls Four Wide, You Really don't need a lot more info !!
And Maybe Gradient the pink wiv Soft Pastels !!
and Flowers !!...no scrub the Flowers !!!
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Well YOU, Sammi are Waaaayyyyy smarter & more Graphic Artsy than that other person whose site I was commenting on, thinking it was you & giving you Wayyyy "the benifit of the doubt"
!(I'm, laughing too much now!)
Funny 'cause I was seeing the comments here saying "Great" & looking at these misspelled words & awkward phrases on that other site......thinking
"well ...a bit of help, perhaps".
I thought I was saving the world!! rotflmao
But I sure waz passionate!!!
Nice work..
Thanks for aiding me to get these belly laughs!!!
See...sammi, Transcendental Sillification!!
Free fer da typin'!
Whheeeeeeee!!!
Spacephantom
Da In Nov 2008

780 post(s)
March 9, 2010
The design overall looks fine to me. Always be aware of the need for search engine optimisation though. There's no point in going to the trouble of building a site if people can't find it.

For advice on SEO, go here -
http://www5.totemcash.com/free/tutorials.php#tutorial30

One important aspect is to make sure you use plenty of key words and phrases in your text which are popular search terms. So I would recommend you use the google adwords keyword tool -

https://adwords.google.co.uk/select/KeywordToolExternal

I've found it invaluable for researching keywords for my own affiliate site (still in the planning stage).

One bit of research I did, using keyword tool, was posted here some time ago - the top 20 most searched for vghd girls. I.e. the best names to feature on an affiliate site if you want to maximize the number of people who find it through google.

http://www73.virtuagirlhd.com/us/forum_post.php?foId=3&ftId=10308

Have a look and feel free to use my findings if you want.
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
Maybe 2 large full body pics, one on each side, of image capture stripper babes caught in action positioned mostly to the side but overflowing behind main pics in front. Fills up the pink area. Pink might be toned a bit more red.(lust/passion)

Oh, no need to multi pic Jana H.

I think didge's above cartoon gif image should be placed front & center!
NO!!!
RougeTrade
Da In Nov 2007

5 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Great idea Sammi, and with your insight and connections I am sure that you will be very successful. As already mentioned the color is fine, and just widen it up to use up the space on the sides. All the best for your site, and please keep us updated.
MrSinclair
Da In Dec 2008

34 post(s)
March 9, 2010
I think it looks great, just one thing get rid of that Jenni Gregg card. I never could stand that censored photo.
roadhog256
Da In Mar 2008

6 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Obviously you have plenty of feedback - in my opinion, if you look around the actual Vgirl site it does carry many pink and reddish hues. so I don't feel you are to far off choosing pink as a base and following the advice from above the gradient makes the page easier to look at.
good luck with it.
OhioSammi
Da In Feb 2010

122 post(s)
76dude
Da In Jan 2009

17 post(s)
jimbo38
Da In Mar 2009

156 post(s)
March 9, 2010
@Sammi.
The second one is a huge improvement! There's 2 things I'd change, but I'll wait until you decide on the final layout before posting suggestions.
I would'nt know where to start with website designs, but I've a seen a few! Wish I could be more help. Excellent!
EverthangForever
Da In Oct 2009

2465 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
@Sammi. index2 is flashier but check it out on a blackberry or somethang to see it fits.
Check out your style="width" statements in your stylesheets & main HTML that you are not mixing absolute widths with %'s. On certain browser/s the index2 page may not be compressing well into a smaller screen. Google a many-browsers page to see results or look at it on as many handhelds as you can. Otherwise Caribbean's calling - Yay, you Go Girl !!! ;)
plasonic
Da In Dec 2007

1356 post(s)
March 9, 2010
Oooo yeah!
http://www.desktopbabeshd.com/index2.html is the best between the two.
Very nice site. Good work.
Love the use of the Jana H preview.

A few suggestions:
When I click on any of the "download here/free free free" points it sets me up on the tutorial page for "download girls"! Although it is just a click away I think users should be directly referred to the
"Download Software" tutorial page automatically to avoid any mistakes/*****.
Other than the repeated Lola card in the line up, there is a glitch in that when I click on a card picture I do not get that babe but do get info on another one.(I click on Lola, info on Jen Max comes up.)
I think it should be the girl that is pictured that comes up.
Nothing happens if I "click here to see all the girls".
"Here" should mean HERE.
Maybe "here" means on the cards above, still a bit *****.
Purely personal, but maybe a few more well known babes, Aria,Jana C.,Melissa, should be in "big cards" line up, not Julya.
I love it!!

Starryk
Da In Nov 2008

1859 post(s)
March 9, 2010 (edited)
the second Version of the site looks great.
However i was wondering about the girls coming up on the first version to be 'catched';-). I'm sure i haven't seen that show here(I think she looks like Monica Sweet but i could be wrong and wouldn't put money on that). And the first girl (the one on the right) coming up i haven't seen here at all. Maybe they're from VG2 but i find such things distracting if i see a girl want to get more from her so follow the link and come to a site where nothing of that girl is to be seen. Totem did that by using Stacy Silver on their VG banner when i joined and i searched the whole site for her and was disappointed that i couldn't find her in the end.
This is probably Totems fault for offering old adds still but if they offer multiple of these animation please look for one that offers actual Vgirl shows.

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